improvement?

by Rosa
(Panama)


Q:


Hi, can you give me any suggestions? Where should I improve?

A:

This is a beautiful drawing Rose. If I were to nitpick I'd say the only place that could use improvement is perhaps the shadow that the hair might cast along the right eyebrow (left hand side of the drawing). I know that the area right under the brow is usually lighter. But because it is so close to the hair, you might consider letting the hair cast a small shadow there - maybe just a sliver of shadow.

Otherwise I think you've done a great job.

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